MUCH better
this sounds way better than your last version. The composition alone in your first version was just another trance song to me, and even though the basis stays the same in the track (from what I can remember, did you add in a part or two?), its interesting to show how much a difference tweaking the sounds and mixing it up with more spice can improve your track. In retrospect, if a listener was to hear your preset song and this one in comparison they would see how crappy (or basic) you make those stock samples and synths sound ;)
I like the intro with the visual FX and manipulation of sounds. Piano melody is pretty catchy, fits in the trance genre like a glove. Kick is nice and punching, good use of automation/reverse effects throughout. Saw leads and backing sounds were designed and mixed adequately. I like the beat in the interlude. really like that synth too around 2:02.
I guess my only qualm is the track lacks a climax. It keeps building up, and then going down into a lull. Something as simple as adding hi-hats and maybe harmonizing with the main melodical theme may help you achieve that anticipated section. ending was a bit abrupt too, but i'm sure you know that. Right now, it sounds mostly like one long extended intro, which isnt entirely bad if this is just in its demo stages.
keep up the good work, a real nice professional song in here