Great
YOU RULE! ^__________^
=The Good=
-Everything, 8bit sounds + reverb = genius!
-I love the melody too, nice bouncy basslines, cheery movement with the higher end synths
-Love the Mario effects
-Bitcrushed drums = win
-Perfectly constructed from the end to start
=The Bad=
-Nothing! well I wish it could be longer!
Ideas = 10/10 Diversity = 9/10 Clarity = 10/10
Will I listen to this again: YESSSSSSSS! Favorite'd :]
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I like the general ideas in this track. There were some parts and sounds that could be switched (or removed) in my opinion up a little but for most the composition suits the mood you're going for real well ^_^
=The Good=
-Really interesting pads you start with, like the progression
-Key melodies go along really with the track, I like when you harmonize the keys
-Beat works decent
-Basslines rolls pretty smoothly
-The general themes are pretty entertaining
-There's enough variations in here to be suffice for a 7+ minute song without becoming repetive
-Good Sytrus preset choices: the pad, bellls, and the piano thing you used in the start. They all work well with themes.
=The Bad=
- Levels and panning- experiment in the mixer by making certain parts louder, and quieter, try panning the instrument more to left, some subtle EQ changes wouldn't hurt, like putting a touch of more bass on the bass guitar
- Put some reverb on the piano for depth
- Some of the synths sound too generic, don't be afraid to start messing with the wave shape, or juicing it up with a thicker chorus effect.
-you really need some more realistic drum samples for this track-stock FL samples dont gel to well in here
-beat could be changed up more in certain parts, try using less kicks in some parts and more snares
- There's some unecessary dissonance in here, because the general themes are tonal and soft it doesn't really call for any of that. The phrase at 1:48 is were the dissonance occurs, specifically at 1:49 and 1:56...try fixing those chords. I atleast think you should ^_^
-Presets I didn't like: Just really the FL slayer. A guitar would work well in here, I just don't like the sound of the one you have here...try browsing through the presets more or messing with the effects. I wish I could say more but I've never used FL slayer ^_^
-There's some minor clipping in parts (when the volume meter reaches the red), try experimenting with soft clippers/compressors
-Hmmm...not really jazz, I thought it falls more under pop or ambient :]
I like this track! I would just recommend experimening more with the mixing and sound development aspects. You've already got a bunch of tracks and the talent to make a pretty nice composition, so why not move a step forth? :) Good luck!
Thank you so much with the help. I'll probably try experimenting with the suggestions you gave me.
I've been getting a lot of complaints about my beats..rofl, but unfortunately that's all I have to make beats with...
Unless someone knows of a place where I can get samples, but I don't like to use sample beats =/.
Sucks to know that there is more bad than good, lol, but it will give me something to work on.
Well, thanks so much for the advice!
^.~
very relaxing
another nice track from you :). it has a very peaceful and relaxing atmosphere.
=The Good=
-Original techno sound
-Love the reverb and echo FX
-Beat is pretty nice, like the snare sample
-Synths work great in the deep reverb, I like that filtered sound running constantly through the background
=The Bad=
-Too short!
Ideas: 9/10 Diversity: 7/10 Clarity: 9.5/10
will I listen to again: Yes ^____^ another track of yours going into my favorites!
*Jumps*
great, professional sounding trance track!
=The Good=
-Great catchy melodies throughout
-Decent professional sound, like the effects and filters on the synths, like how you start into the beat
-Great choice of synths, I especially like the string pads
-Sidechaining!
-dynamic hi hats, no overused samples
-new saw or whatever you use on the second half is awesome
=The Bad=
-Can't find much
-Snare could be raised
-it is repetitive, but not a bad point. Maybe it could use one more melody in here for being 4 minutes. Besides, trance is supposed to be repetitive!
Ideas: 8.5/10 Diversity: 8.5/10 Clarity: 9/10
Will I listen to again: Yes! dl'ed and favorited ^____^
Hey man thakns for the review,These reviews are the ones im allways looking to get back from people so cheers
Im glad you like the song man
Only took me about 6 hours
I didnt think i t would turn out this well and get such a good score and so much attension.
I guess this is my best track so far
Once again cheers mate thanks for the review
Hmm
Not too bad, some nice sounding riffs in here, but there's no transitions or really connections between sections.
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=The Good=
-Some of the riffs are really enjoyable, actually I like most of them, some typical trance themes, but are nice when complimented with the pianos, and that choir and those cheery plucked strings riffs. The bells in the middle make the overall feel very happy. That square/triangle synth that sounds like its doubled in fifths is cool. They are well constructed too, and have a nice utilization of dynamics to increase the realistic.
-Cool percussion in the end, conga and a cowbell maybe? But i like the style
-Potentially has some interesting themes in here to build around
=The Bad=
-There is a lack of structure, you're just plugging in bunch of riffs. Put some transitioning parts in here, and carry out the individual themes out longer and develop them more fully. I'm questioning whether if those riffs are your own or if you're just slapping them together with a program like Garageband or Ejay. It was way to random for me and jumped all over the place.
-Establish your themes! Include some of the stuff you start in with the beginning, put it somewhere else in the song but with a twist.
-Keep the drums going on longer to sustain more of groove
-Where's the bass at yo?
Ideas: 7/10 Diversity: 3.5/10 Clarity: 8/10 Overall: 6/10
Listen to Again: Can't say I will :(
sorry about your tought week :( get better soon i hope
thanks big help man have a good day!!
btw these arnt like what you said just made the "riffs" and put em in, its sposed to sound like nature for a day.
Nice-o
Very good actually.
=The Good=
-Sequenced quite well, you start off with a great melody, and gradually add on more
-Nice drum beats: lots of variations, and interesting original samples
-Very nice pads and synth selection to go with the mood
-Really chilled out mood
-Bassline pad is good, melodies are nice and fresh
-Mixing was pretty well done and spaced alright..
-Overall mix sounds original to my ears
- I see some type of ice dragon from this actually-
=The bad=
-Ending sounds chopped off, sounds like you left a note off your melody to me
-Nothing. But it's not an amazing track either, but very effective for what it is. It could possibly use one more melody to bring out the themes. And maybe something light in the background around the mid section. Again, nothing wrong this.
Ideas: 8.5/10 Diversity: 7.5/10 Clarity: 8/10 Overall: 8/10
Worth Listening to Again: Definetly
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